Barrack Obama:
Barack Hussein Obama was born on august 4, 196 in Honolulu, Hawaii. He is the son of barrack Obama sr. and Ann Dunham who were later divorced. His father was a foreign student who moved to Hawaii from Kenya. Obama’s mother died from ovarian cancer after moving to Indonesia with her new husband. Obama then stayed with his maternal grand parents in Hawaii. Obama moved to Los Angeles where he transferred colleges to Columbia University in New York where he got a major in political science. He later graduated from Harvard law school. He was then a community organizer where he helped raise lots of money. Obama is a junior United States senator in illinoise. As a democrat in the senate, Obama helped create legislatures for conventional weapons control, lobbying, electoral fraud, climate change, nuclear terrorism, and taking care of people who came back from war. He is currently the democratic nominee for the 2008 presidential election.
Barack Hussein Obama was born on august 4, 196 in Honolulu, Hawaii. He is the son of barrack Obama sr. and Ann Dunham who were later divorced. His father was a foreign student who moved to Hawaii from Kenya. Obama’s mother died from ovarian cancer after moving to Indonesia with her new husband. Obama then stayed with his maternal grand parents in Hawaii. Obama moved to Los Angeles where he transferred colleges to Columbia University in New York where he got a major in political science. He later graduated from Harvard law school. He was then a community organizer where he helped raise lots of money. Obama is a junior United States senator in illinoise. As a democrat in the senate, Obama helped create legislatures for conventional weapons control, lobbying, electoral fraud, climate change, nuclear terrorism, and taking care of people who came back from war. He is currently the democratic nominee for the 2008 presidential election.
3 comments:
Noah,
I like how you added Obama's stances on the issues. I also like how you put what education they got when he was younger including what colleges he went to and what he majored in.
In a regular story it would take a while to get what they stand for out of the post. But with this, it was one sentence and easy to find Obama's stances.
I didnt know that Obama went to a different college before he went to Harvard.
I do have one question though. What is a junior United States senator? I have read that before, but I'm not really sure what the "junior" part of junior United States senator means.
Barack Obama:
From reading your blog, I feel the major viewpoint you wanted to stress about this candidate is he is a very well qualified man to take the roll of president. I think this because Noah speaks of his achievements very highly. THe topic sentence does relate to the article because it just shows the history of Obama.
I like how you included both his college and earlier education. Also, I learned that he was a communtiy organizer where he helped to raise lots of money. I liked how you put his stances in, and I already knew that he is a Illinois State Senator.
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